does Brazil have sharks?

[marcicat]

Okay, so this is what’s happened in my story so far.

1. serious and emo beginning part

2. surprise!crossover

3. repeat #2

4. ridiculous silly part

5. completely random and meaningless section

6. gratuitous kitten reference

7. car chase!

I think the real question is not “wtf is going on in this story?” but “would it be possible to introduce a flotilla of sharks at this point, so as to jump over them?”

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Comments

[dovetales.livejournal.com]

It's not jumping the shark if you never come back down!

[marcicat]

That is so true! (And what bigger leap than making one of your characters *be* God?)