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Shen Wei’s grip on the railing tightened. He moved his hand closer and nudged Shen Wei’s pinky with his own. Purely out of concern for the railing’s structural integrity, of course. Shen Wei didn’t quite smile, but he let Zhao Yunlan hook their fingers together, and when he said, “I see,” it sounded more like ‘I need to think about this,’ and less like ‘I may spontaneously travel back in time myself just to slap the Hallows out of your hands every time you even thought about touching them.’

Technically only four sentences, but one of them runs on (and on)!

Date: 2019-06-30 11:26 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] starandrea
I love this (and it makes me laugh)! Such classic relating: "purely out of concern for the railing's structural integrity," ha ha! And of course "I may spontaneously travel back in time myself to slap the Hallows out if your hands" - I believe he would!! :D

Also, I love the pinky touching. ♥ It sounds Just Right, both in terms of visual subtlety and personal care for not startling someone. xoxo

Date: 2019-07-02 01:08 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] starandrea
Yes! I totally agree on both counts! {{♥}}

Date: 2019-07-01 02:26 pm (UTC)
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Ahhhh! I love this snippet, it is SO THEM. ♥

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