Sunday six
Aug. 4th, 2019 06:08 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
marcicatAn action scene happened! I was shocked. It will come as no surprise that I dealt with said scene the same way I handle all action scenes: the POV character was distracted by something else, eliminating any need to actually describe what happened. (I figure if you do something enough times you can eventually get away with just calling it your style.)
“How much is the treaty affecting you?” he asked, and Ye Zun spared a second to glare at him before focusing back on Zhu Jiu.
“Some,” he said. “Not directly.”
“It’s blocking your connection to Dixing,” Shen Wei countered. “You need more power.”
“Can we help?”
[PS They're all TOTALLY FINE. EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE OKAY.]
“How much is the treaty affecting you?” he asked, and Ye Zun spared a second to glare at him before focusing back on Zhu Jiu.
“Some,” he said. “Not directly.”
“It’s blocking your connection to Dixing,” Shen Wei countered. “You need more power.”
“Can we help?”
[PS They're all TOTALLY FINE. EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE OKAY.]
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Date: 2019-08-06 03:18 am (UTC)ALSO KAITLIN WITH THE DARTS IN THE HUT: "you know what my problem is - I need more power!"